Monday, July 10, 2023

The The Sound and The Shape: Notes for an expo of collaged poetry

These are are notes I made for a more elaborate essay that never really gelled.  It's still a decent starting point for a look at found, concrete, and other forms of "visual" poetry.

Letters of the alphabet are images, symbols that indicate a sound.  Or not.

Strung together as written or printed words, letters communicate meaning via the eyes, not the ears.  Hence, what sound letters represent ceases to be important when reading.

But language is both visual and aural.  But neither is essential: the deaf communicate, as do the blind.

The deaf communicate visually, the blind aurally, and by touch.  

Communication can occur  via eyes, ears, or fingers.  Whatever conduit leads to the brain.

Hieroglyphics are letters of a sort, abstracted forms referring to nature: birds, plants, people, rivers. More complex than a simple letter, each one is a word unto itself.

Chinese pictograms are complex letters that might refer to a sound, or an entire word. "Tree" in English requires four letters. In Chinese, just one pictogram does the job.

Letters have an attached phoneme.  What a letter looks like and what it sounds like are two different things. Slam and rap lean on rhythm, meter: sound. Concrete or visual poetry leans on how letters or words look, are arranged, their relationship to the page. Like any collage, concrete poetry can be representative or abstract.


Both visual/concrete poetry and poetry more concerned with sounds may or may not be concerned with "meaning."


Asemic writing refers to writing without any semantic content. It is a purely visual medium and may use invented letters or glyphs, or existing letters.


 "Ph" = "F".    Philosophy = Filosofia


Sofia. Sophia. The relationship between sound and its visual representation is not fixed.


Does the Sator Square qualify as poetry?  Was it just a word game, a clever use of symmetry?  Did it have cosmic significance?  Magick? 


The oldest known square was found in Pompeii and thus predates the town's destruction in 62 CE.


S A T O R

A R E P O

T E N E T

O P E R A

R O T A S


Simmias of Rhodes Axe. 300 BC?



These texts were called carmen figurata. In addition to Axe (Pelekys), Simmias produced Pteryges (Wings), the Soon (Egg).


So called altar poems were of the same nature but the text represented an altar. Examples date back to antiquity.


Altar poems and the carmen figurata are essentially concrete poetry.


They form a recognizable image that is evoked by the words by which it composed.


1653


George Herbert Easter Wings



This would be reproduced in the 20th century by Apollinaire with his Calligrammes.  Apollinaire was considered avant-garde, but his method dated back to before the Common Era. 

Here words are used to form a picture, but it's still not exactly using words themselves like elements of a collage.

18th C.


William S. Burroughs experimented with text arranged into columns to mimic newspapers. He also read across columns and strung the fragments together to create new sentences. The technique differed from his cut-ups and fold-ins but was basically the same thing. Finding new sentences embedded in texts by rearranging fragments. However....


1760's....Caleb Whitefoord - wine merchant, diplomat, poet - and London neighbor and friend of Benjamin Franklin, was doing a form of cut-up in the late eighteenth century:


It was Whitefoord’s genius to notice that when you took a broadsheet newspaper of tightly set columns, and started reading across the paper’s columns—rather than reading down to the column’s next line—you could achieve what he described as “coupled persons and things most heterogeneous, things so opposite in the nature and qualities, that no man alive would ever have thought of joining them together.” Whitefoord called this cross-reading, and he was so amused by it that he would publish sheets of his favorite specimens and hand them out to friends in Fleet Street coffeehouses.

Dr. Salamander will, by her Majesty’s command, 

undertake a voyage round—

The head-dress of the present month.


Wanted to take care of an elderly gentlewoman—

An active young man just come from the country.


Yesterday the new Lord Mayor was sworn in,

and afterwards toss’d and gored several Persons.


Removed to Marylebone, for the benefit of the air—

The City and Liberties of Westminster.


Notice is hereby given—

And no notice taken.

Burroughs did exactly that and cut-ups and fold-ins mimic the process.  


1868-70


Isidore Ducasse/Lautréamont


Maldoror included lines lifted directly from previous texts, especially descriptions of nature. As Burroughs said:  if Josef Conrad had described a treeline perfectly, why not just lift the text and use it as the background for the action in your text, much like collage?


In artistic practice, there is a history of repurposing and plagiarism that predates the digital. The pseudonymous Comte de Lautréamont, a French poet who died in 1870, whose work later influenced the Surrealists and Situationists, said:

"Plagiarism is necessary. Progress demands it. Staying close to an author’s phrasing, plagiarism exploits his expressions, erases false ideas, replaces them with correct ideas."

A man of his word, Lautréamont plagiarised in his two major works: Les Chants de Maldoror and Poésies.

1914 Constantinople, a 'ferro-concrete poem' from Tango with Cows by Vasily Kamensky.



1918 Apollinaire Calligrammes.



Made poems to resemble the subject. Rain, for example.  Very much in the vein of Herbert.


1920


How to Make a Dadaist Poem

(method of Tristan Tzara)


To make a Dadaist poem:

  • Take a newspaper.

  • Take a pair of scissors.

  • Choose an article as long as you are planning to make your poem.

  • Cut out the article.

  • Then cut out each of the words that make up this article and put them in a bag.

  • Shake it gently.

  • Then take out the scraps one after the other in the order in which they left the bag.

  • Copy conscientiously.

  • The poem will be like you.

  • And here are you a writer, infinitely original and endowed with a sensibility that is charming though beyond the understanding of the vulgar.



T.S. Eliot, The Waste Land (1922) and John Dos Passos' U.S.A. Trilogy (1930-36)


Incorporated newspaper clippings.


Burroughs and Gysin, Cut-ups, 1950’s & 60's


The method is simple. Here is one way to do it. Take a page. Like this page. Now cut down the middle and cross the middle. You have four sections: 1 2 3 4 … one two three four. Now rearrange the sections placing section four with section one and section two with section three. And you have a new page. Sometimes it says much the same thing. Sometimes something quite different–(cutting up political speeches is an interesting exercise) — in any case you will find that it says something and something quite definite. Take any poet or writer you fancy. Heresay, or poems you have read over many times. The words have lost meaning and life through years of repetition. Now take the poem and type out selected passages. Fill a page with excerpts. Now cut the page. You have a new poem. As many poems as you like.


The Nova Trilogy (1961-1967)

Minutes to Go 1960

The Exterminator 1960


The Burroughs File


Letters are represented by symbols and colors.


The Travel Agency is on Fire 


The editor says there are three collections of cutups that may number 11K+ pages each....


There’s been a lot of [objections to the cut-ups], a sort of a superstitious reverence for the word. My God, they say, you can’t cut up these words. Why can’t I? I find it much easier to get interest in the cut-ups from people who are not writers—doctors, lawyers, or engineers, any open-minded, fairly intelligent person—than from those who are….People say to me, “Oh, this is all very good, but you got it by cutting up.” I say that has nothing to do with it, how I got it. What is any writing but a cut-up? Somebody has to…*do* the cutting up. Remember that I first made selections. Out of hundreds of possible sentences that I might have used, I chose one

Oulipo

Lettrisme

Situationism

Fluxus


All these movements experimented with language, asemic writing, concrete poetry.


1964-1965 Charles Henri Ford Poster Poems



https://www.moma.org/collection/works/134480


Concrete Poetry


Postwar Brazil


d.a. levy


From Levy's Tibetan Stroboscope. 
 
Levy wrote poetry but experimented a lot with concrete poetry.  In the Stroboscope, he experimented with what he called "destructive writing.". Burroughs exhorted readers "trop rub out the word" but his cut-ups still used words. In his journals he went further and replaced words with symbols or different colored dots.  But until his scrapbooks are published we can only find some examples in The Burroughs File.

Levy achieved a similar goal in the Stroboscope poems.  By over inking his mimeograph machine or overprinting text, he arrived at what looked like text but was in fact illegible.  An example of asemic writing.

1967E  Emmett Williams Anthology of Concrete Poetry


Gysin's permutations


Visual Poetry


John M. Bennett


Sound Poetry


1960 Pistol Poem Gysin


Pure sound. Found sound. Asemic writing. If language is both visual and aural, isn't using sampled sound akin to using some words in found texts (or vice versa)?


1970’s


Bowie and the Stones used cutups for lyrics, under Burroughs’ influence.


1980's


Hip-Hop and EDM: Sampling. See: Pistol Poem (Brion Gysin)


2007


Jonathan Lethem The Ecstasy of Influence


All mankind is of one author, and is one volume; when one man dies, one chapter is not torn out of the book, but translated into a better language; and every chapter must be so translated. . . .—John Donne


Emojis.  Acronyms: WTF, LOL, LMFAO, IMO, etc.



Blackout Poetry



John Carroll



Austin Kleon


Take a text and start blacking out words until a poem is formed by the remaining words.


Some trace this back to Whitefoord, through Tzara and Burroughs. It's not the exact same technique, but a variation on manipulating a found text to create something new. Whether using fragments cut from a paper, or words left after redacting a text with a sharpie, or lifting paragraphs to re-use in one's own text.


Is it plagiarism or theft? I think not.. No because the origin of the texts is clear. There's no attempt to "fool" the reader. In fact, that the texts are found is part of the attraction.

Friday, July 7, 2023

Thursday, July 6, 2023

How long before they notice?

Title of an article about the doomed OceanGate vessel:

Videos of 'Titan Submersible Implosion' and 'Screams' Flood Social Media

Really?




Monday, July 3, 2023

Uncanny Valley of the Dolls

The Pygmalion story in essence, is as follows:

According to Ovid, when Pygmalion saw the Propoetides of Cyprus practicing prostitution, he began "detesting the faults beyond measure which nature has given to women". He determined to remain celibate and to occupy himself with sculpting. He made a sculpture of a woman that he found so perfect he fell in love with it. Pygmalion kisses and fondles the sculpture, brings it various gifts, and creates a sumptuous bed for it.
In time, Aphrodite's festival day came and Pygmalion made offerings at the altar of Aphrodite. There, too afraid to admit his desire, he quietly wished for a bride who would be "the living likeness of my ivory girl". When he returned home, he kissed his ivory statue, and found that its lips felt warm. He kissed it again, and found that the ivory had lost its hardness. Aphrodite had granted Pygmalion's wish.

Back when I started my last post about artificial life, I'd only recently come across the story of Christian Montenegro, a Colombian man who is married to a doll, and has had three children with her.  He posts the family pics on TikTok.   To be honest, I found it creepy.


Christian and Natalia welcome Sammy into the World

Montenegro and Family

After my post I looked for him on the internets, never having known his name.  He was far from the only man married to a doll.  This page talks about five such men.  And none of them are Montenegro.

https://twitter.com/Davecat/status/831486855577272321/photo/1


One of them, however, is Davecat, self-described "Robosexual and iDollator," whose picture intrigued me.  I Googled him and came across this interview in the Atlantic.  It's thoughtful and worth a read.  One thing he articulates is a common theme: These men have had failed relationships and find it easier to deal with these idealized women; inert and passive.   One way of looking at it.  But Davecat, well, he is one articulate fellow, and a second interview I read with him goes a bit more into his attitudes and ideas about what he calls "Synthetik" women. 

They are all modern Pygmalions.  Repelled or used by women, or otherwise frustrated with more conventional relationships in one way or another, they create an ideal woman, or a facsimile thereof. Like Pygmalion, each one "kisses and fondles the sculpture, brings it various gifts, and creates a sumptuous bed for it."   Not having a sympathetic goddess at hand, however, whatever life their dolls have remains a thing of the imagination.

Attraction to a doll, sexual or otherwise, is called Agalmatophilia a kind of objectophilia....

Davecat appears in a documentary about the subject:


I'm a pretty open-minded guy, but I admit, I find all this pretty weird.  And rather sad that these men can't develop relationships with real women.  Since my divorce, I've been single, and I can empathize. Loneliness sucks.  It can kill.  But I don't think I would find any comfort in a doll.

And it just goes on and on.  Wikipedia speaks of doll fetishism, robot fetishism, gynoids, sex dolls, human furniture....

I remarked, perhaps too flippantly, in my last post that the love of a doll may br akin to necrophilia. One article I read says that it's a product of toxic masculinity. 

One thing Davecat notes is that iDollators tend to be men with female dolls.  Those male dolls he knows about are to a number owned by gay men.

So maybe it is a product of toxic masculinity.  Davecat didn't strike me as a toxic guy.  Sadly he didn't get back to me.  I probably shouldn't have put a reference to necrophilia in my first email.  Maybe he feels he's said all he can, or needs to, already.  

In the meantime, it will be worth checking out Carol Ann Duffy's Pygmalion's Bride, a book which looks at Ovid's story from Galatea's point of view.
Pygmalion is the archetype of all men, who desire to be dominant in the relationship and shape how women should be. 
I'd remove that first comma!

Anyway, until more thoughts come together on this subject, I'll leave you to take a stroll through the uncanny valley of the dolls....

Davecat, if you do read this, get in touch.  I really do want to understand and not to mock or defame. And any women out there who read this, please comment.  This post could use needs a woman's point of view.

A Million Ducks?

 

Today I noticed that Laws of Silence has had over a million hits: 1,001,035 to be exact.  What began as a way to oblige myself to gather my thoughts and set them down coherently has evolved into hundreds, if not thousands of pages dealing with a wide range of topics.  Some of it is, in retrospect, disjointed.  Some of it is filler.  And then there are gems which I think contain insightful and original reflections which, if pursued and whipped into shape, could form the kernel of a dozen or so doctoral theses.  And by whipped, I mean really flogged.  The diamonds are more than in the rough; they are buried a foot deep in a sand trap.

A few figures

Aside from myself, The Gid has written a number of popular posts.  Since 2007 we've acquired a massive 2 followers!  We've written 723 posts.  We've received and made 2012 comments.  For some reason "Logo. Hollow circle above downward arrow crossed with a curlicued horn-shaped symbol and then a short bar: Matter and Spirit, or Venus' hand mirror...." has led the charge with 73.1k hits.

2010 was productive, with 125 posts.  That's an average of almost 10 and a half per month!  But depression takes its toll.  In 2019 and 2020 there were 3 posts each year.  But in 2022 we roared back with 79 posts.v  We've had 7 so far in 2023, but part of that is due to the creation of a blog dedicated to the documentation of the characters and events of a fictional universe, generated by AI. For deets, pleas visit AI, Cap'n!  As far as I know, this will be the first work of fiction to be written in the form of a blog.  A companion, perhaps, to Plastic Tub, the first work of fiction written as a Wiki.  The Tub's not dead, but sleeping, and clocks in at over 600 pages.
 
Ripoffs and props

Since monetizing the blog I've made about 140 euros in ad revenue.  Our work has been shamelessly copied and passed off as the work of others. We've had our feed systematically posted to another blog with better SEO to steal our hits.

On the bright side, many serious blogs have linked to us, and we've been mentioned in at least one academic conference and cited in a a doctoral dissertation. Some posts have appeared in bibliographies.

We've made some friends but aside from a few criticisms, no enemies. I'm proud of many of these posts, and it represents a significant part of my work as a writer.

The requisite sentimentality

Inshallah, we will continue to learn about fascinating shards of history, or tempests in teapots as one reader once remarked, then write 'em up, and break those laws of silence.

Thanks to The Gid.  He's authored a few of our ten most-visited posts, and even though he doesn't write often for LoS today, he still reads drafts s and suggests edits and ideas when I'm feeling stuck or floundering.  Thanks, Dave!  

Keep on reading, folks, I think the best is yet to come...

Saturday, July 1, 2023

R.I.P. Monte Cazazza (1954-2023)

Artist, prankster, and industrial music pioneer Monte Cazazza has passed on.  

His work can be streamed here.

Cazazza was an underground legend who deserves wider recognition, He worked with Factrix, Survival Research Laboratories, and Boyd Rice, pioneers to a number.  It was he who first coined the phrase "Industrial music for industrial people," popularized by Throbbing Gristle.  Anyone up on their industrial music history will recognize among Cazazza friends and collaborators the creators of what evolved into today's industrial acts:  NIN, Marylin Manson, et al.  The purists sneer at these pale shadows....the founders' music grew from avant-garde performance art and the writings of Burroughs and Luigi Rosso as much as any pre-existing music.  Indeed, they had to actually invent some of the instruments they used.

Cazazza's version of Brion Gysin's Kick That Habit Man is an indication of his avant-garde influences.  The permutations of this phrase were generated by a computer and were meant to be recited -- and were -- at events such as the Domaine Poétique, a kind of happening featuring pre-recorded sound, light shows and projections, and the recitation of works such as the permuted poems of which Kick is only one example.


Cazazza is also a member of a club including Billly Childish and Sonny Vincent:  artist/musicians banned from art school campuses.  I'm not gonna provide a link to those tales.  You'll learn more by searching it out for yourself.  Cazazza was ahead of his time; an entire genre owes him its very name....

R.I.P. M.C.